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PostPosted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 2:14 pm    Post subject: Flash
 
Hello all !

I have just started to learn flash and i would like your oppinion on the small demo i have put on for my mate steves latest venture!

http://www.niceandeasywebsites.co.uk/ 

Any feedback welcomed just dont be too harsh ! its my first flash movie ! lol

It isnt intended to run as a website, but as a little demo he is going to be forwarding to people on cd.

Thanks in advance !
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 4:20 pm    Post subject:
 
I like the design and concept however the text and whole size seems very small!

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 4:51 pm    Post subject:
 
It should display at 800x600 in the browser, when its done for the cd presentation it will be done for full screen.

Have a look at it from this link

http://www.niceandeasywebsites.co.uk/niceandeasy.swf 
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 4:59 pm    Post subject:
 
Ok that link is bigger yes.

Nice work!

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 8:25 pm    Post subject:
 
Paul,

You might like to change the second line to "Websites too complicated to view?". Also, it may just be my eyesight but I think you have an extra l instead of an i in 'Build' on the fourth line.

Other than that, despite not usually being a fan of flash, I could happily live with this one. Nice piece of work.

Regards,

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 01, 2008 12:13 pm    Post subject:
 
Where is this intended to go? My attention was waning a bit, perhaps you could reduce the wait between each new line. Also it would be kinda cool if the text made a sound as it was typed, like it does in films! I'm also thinking the opening sequence to The Hitch Hikers Guide to the Galaxy (first episode) when the text comes on the screen counting down the time remaining.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4U8SalQ_sqE 

I just love that kind of futuristic computer stuff that only seems to happen in TV land!
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